I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For the last 2 days my Sister and I have been working on a slide it's called Msp house tour its all made up nothing real :) so here is the slide if you have any feedback be sure to comment it:
You are good at pictures because the msp people is cool. Did you think about spelling? How did you do it because I want to make one like that. Who is the one who say’s bonnie?
I liked the way you did all of the animations on your slide Cayleigh. it’s amazing i can’t even explain myself! because it’s so amazing .i couldn't believe myself. I love the use of car and the background.This part gave me a memory about when i first moved some of my stuff into a two story house and i had to get a house tour and the girl who did the house tour.Next time, you could add a part two because that will be a very creative thing to do for the animation.how did you do that and why.
Wow you knocked my socks off with your post because I loved the slides you make! I also think you have some great ideas for why we Did you think about the way you did the slides .same words are not understandable Why do you did you make the blog post and when did you make the blog post? You did a very great job on the post.
kia orana cayleigh shyla here, did you know you had the same slide twice when they were speaking? the best part was the water slide room! great job keep it up!
Hi cayleigh I love the animation and the house tour. You can add more rooms and you can add more animations. You don't need to use MSP in all of the animations. And Maaari mo bang idagdag sa akin sa isang animation mangyaring sa susunod na pagkakataon. ← that means Could you add me in a animation please next time
Hi kaunteya here. I like your animation about a tour around the fake house but when you said that your gonna show us around the house you said out house not our house. And by the way I could notice that it is not real because you are not that old and you wouldn't have the money for the house. Also there's no way you could of got two of those cars.
Hola my name is Mushdah im a student in room 6 at owairaka school i really like your little cute dolls you put in there do you guys have a bathroom It made me think of when i did that stuff and put dolls in my slide/drive if you want to see my learning its https/mushdah.blogspot.co.nz :)
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You are good at making slides and msp Did you know you can change the colour of the lambo! like blue and yellow! Make sure you add more information
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ReplyDeleteYou are good at pictures because the msp people is cool.
ReplyDeleteDid you think about spelling? How did you do it because I want to make one like that.
Who is the one who say’s bonnie?
I liked the way you did all of the animations on your slide Cayleigh. it’s amazing i can’t even explain myself! because it’s so amazing .i couldn't believe myself. I love the use of car and the background.This part gave me a memory about when i first moved some of my stuff into a two story house and i had to get a house tour and the girl who did the house tour.Next time, you could add a part two because that will be a very creative thing to do for the animation.how did you do that and why.
ReplyDeleteWow you knocked my socks off with your post because I loved the slides you make! I also think you have some great ideas for why we Did you think about the way you did the slides .same words are not understandable Why do you did you make the blog post and when did you make the blog post? You did a very great job on the post.
ReplyDeleteWow tat blew my mind. you and your friend are introducing your house
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Hi Cayleigh it is lacie here nice job on this anamtion It looks great who did you do it with? what is your favorite part of the anamation?
ReplyDeletekia orana cayleigh shyla here,
ReplyDeletedid you know you had the same slide twice when they were speaking? the best part was the water slide room! great job keep it up!
I love your slide it is one of the bistis slide in the world just a few questions wot day did you make the blog post? good job
ReplyDeleteHi cayleigh I love the animation and the house tour. You can add more rooms and you can add more animations. You don't need to use MSP in all of the animations.
ReplyDeleteAnd Maaari mo bang idagdag sa akin sa isang animation mangyaring sa susunod na pagkakataon. ← that means Could you add me in a animation please next time
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ReplyDeletewow i like your lambos there awsome and the house is big
ReplyDeleteI like those lamborghinis they are pretty cool but I know faster cars if you want
ReplyDeleteHi kaunteya here. I like your animation about a tour around the fake house but when you said that your gonna show us around the house you said out house not our house. And by the way I could notice that it is not real because you are not that old and you wouldn't have the money for the house. Also there's no way you could of got two of those cars.
ReplyDeleteHey cayleigh its Tru here I really like this.But Ihink u need 2 change the fact that u have 2 of each slide.
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Kia ora Cayleigh
ReplyDeleteChloe here
Nice work with your animation skills I am really really impresed with your work.
Next time with your first slide make sure you sentence makes sence.
I love how one girl has the really cool view of the city and the other has the pool in her bedroom.
What was your favorite part about this house tour.
Nice job blog you later
hey guys yes i so agree with you the first slide does not make sense but you tried your best and that is good enough shen did you make this.
DeleteHola my name is Mushdah im a student in room 6 at owairaka school i really like your little cute dolls you put in there do you guys have a bathroom It made me think of when i did that stuff and put dolls in my slide/drive if you want to see my learning its https/mushdah.blogspot.co.nz :)
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