I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Cayleigh, can you add an introduction so people will know quite more information about your blog post, because I don't know what the Jellie Park highlight means. So that is why you have to put an introduction before your main part. Anyways that is a good job!
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Kia ora Cayleigh, can you add an introduction so people will know quite more information about your blog post, because I don't know what the Jellie Park highlight means. So that is why you have to put an introduction before your main part. Anyways that is a good job!
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