Party time!!!
One day there were twins their names were tobey and Olivia. They were getting ready for school. The bus stopped by the pick them up. Then mum found a notice on the floor that had been ripped by seanna their little sister it said that there was going to be a reliever in and she was going to teach the class. When Tobey and Olivia go to school they went into class and talked to their friends. “Where is the teacher said Tobey” Then the meanest principal walked into the class with a stick in her hand sit down you dirty twits. Here is the teacher that is teaching you today her name is Miss Honey… Miss Trunchbull said to Miss honey make them learn a lesson they are dirty twits and they don’t BELONG IN MY SCHOOL “bang” Ok class i’m Miss Honey and I love kids I don't treat them how she does that is not cool at all. So what I have got from your teacher is that the class will do a dance party just our class so HIT THE MUSIC CLASS. The class was having a great time then suddenly Miss trunchbull walked into the classroom “What the what is going on in here said Miss Trunchbull” “were just practicing for the assembly coming up tomorrow said Miss honey” “ok whatever you say you dirty twits” Miss Trunchbull walked out of the classroom with the stick in her hand the stick had 2 nails in the end that no one noticed the only person was Tobey. It was lunch time they got their lunches but pizza’s arrived for Miss Honey. “Yay shouted the students” What a good day we are having said Tobey and Olivia.
One day there were twins their names were tobey and Olivia. They were getting ready for school. The bus stopped by the pick them up. Then mum found a notice on the floor that had been ripped by seanna their little sister it said that there was going to be a reliever in and she was going to teach the class. When Tobey and Olivia go to school they went into class and talked to their friends. “Where is the teacher said Tobey” Then the meanest principal walked into the class with a stick in her hand sit down you dirty twits. Here is the teacher that is teaching you today her name is Miss Honey… Miss Trunchbull said to Miss honey make them learn a lesson they are dirty twits and they don’t BELONG IN MY SCHOOL “bang” Ok class i’m Miss Honey and I love kids I don't treat them how she does that is not cool at all. So what I have got from your teacher is that the class will do a dance party just our class so HIT THE MUSIC CLASS. The class was having a great time then suddenly Miss trunchbull walked into the classroom “What the what is going on in here said Miss Trunchbull” “were just practicing for the assembly coming up tomorrow said Miss honey” “ok whatever you say you dirty twits” Miss Trunchbull walked out of the classroom with the stick in her hand the stick had 2 nails in the end that no one noticed the only person was Tobey. It was lunch time they got their lunches but pizza’s arrived for Miss Honey. “Yay shouted the students” What a good day we are having said Tobey and Olivia.
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ReplyDeletenice post Cayligh
ReplyDeleteCayleigh, I love how creative you have been with your characters because they are clearly nothing like your own teachers and principal! I really like they way that you are taking risks by using speech marks to show when the reader needs to imagine a different voice being used. Think about the use of highlighting for your text, as it is quite difficult to read clearly. I can't wait to see more of your writing on your blog!
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