I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hi cayigh it olivia l. I enjoyed the part when you when you put the beet music in the video I was dancing when I was lisining to the you brought me back to when I made a video of myselfe playing Next time you could add some clues of were the hidin guy was because I didnt find him. But you done a good job
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hi cayigh it olivia
ReplyDeletel. I enjoyed the part when you when you put the beet music in the video I was dancing when I was lisining to the you brought me back to when I made a video of myselfe playing Next time you could add some clues of were the hidin guy was because I didnt find him. But you done a good job