I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school and i like the way that you have added a cake for breakfast and it look's really YUM. Did you think about adding why you picked that cake for breakfast. Next time you could add a little bit more information OTHER THEN THAT BYE BLOG YOU LATER
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Hi it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school and i like the way that you have added a cake for breakfast and it look's really YUM. Did you think about adding why you picked that cake for breakfast. Next time you could add a little bit more information OTHER THEN THAT BYE BLOG YOU LATER
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