I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Cayleigh, Mikayla here. Nice facts about Ramadan. They're very interesting. I see you haven't done much in the time you had, as you said, but maybe next time try to add a bit more so the facts are a bit more interesting and not just single sentences. Is there anything else about Ramadan you know? From Mikayla.
Kia ora, it's Amy here I think you did well with trying to spell month but you spelt mouth instead, but still you did do a good job trying. I like how you did about the cool sunset and that our 5th month is their 9th month in Ramadan. Maybe next time you could have spell-check your writing. Are there any dances or anything like them?
Talofa lava Kian here it is a nice post maybe you could explain more about what ramadan is and why do they do it but I still like it oh and one question what do you mean by mouths.
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Kia Ora Cayleigh, Mikayla here.
ReplyDeleteNice facts about Ramadan. They're very interesting. I see you haven't done much in the time you had, as you said, but maybe next time try to add a bit more so the facts are a bit more interesting and not just single sentences. Is there anything else about Ramadan you know?
From Mikayla.
Kia ora, it's Amy here I think you did well with trying to spell month but you spelt mouth instead, but still you did do a good job trying. I like how you did about the cool sunset and that our 5th month is their 9th month in Ramadan. Maybe next time you could have spell-check your writing. Are there any dances or anything like them?
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Kian here it is a nice post maybe you could explain more about
ReplyDeletewhat ramadan is and why do they do it but I still like it oh and one question what do you mean by mouths.