The Fire on the Hills
I went to my aunty and my cousins were
screaming because he was sleeping on me but then he woke up on me. His dad was outside and i went home and we waited for the news. We got to have a look at the Fire on the Hills! It was not fun! There was 2 fires and it smelt yuck like smoke.
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ReplyDeleteNice work Cayleigh.The people who has not smelt smoke and saw this blog will finally know what smoke smell like.
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