I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi blogger of the week! Well done on your writing, Cayleigh. Your house sounds like the place to be for Easter, can I come?? I really like how you have listed your ideas. It makes it sound kind of like a poem.
Hi Cayleigh, Fenix VT323 Here. I liked the way that you put a photo in your poem or writing. Did you think about more of the things you may more do than find easter eggs. Next time, you could add more photos of easter times. Bye Cayleigh!
Hi it is Kareem, I really like this blog post it is very interesting and how big is the easter eggs? I think this blog post needs some an's in it for vowels
Kia Ora Cayleigh Sita here! I am a year six in Rimu Class you might not of heard of me before! It looks like you have a lot of fun when it comes to easter time! I like how you added where you go to find the eggs and that how you feel after you eat all of them. I also like how you said how much eggs you get that is quite a lot! I have a question, when you say "we get 25 each" what do you mean by each do you have siblings? Keep up the AWESOME work!!! Bye
Kia ora Cayleigh, This is really interesting I like how you woke up and there is eggs outside ill bet you to them. Maybe next time use a different font so it's easier to read and clearer to understand. BLog ya later
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Hi blogger of the week! Well done on your writing, Cayleigh. Your house sounds like the place to be for Easter, can I come?? I really like how you have listed your ideas. It makes it sound kind of like a poem.
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ReplyDeletehi cayliegh great jobyou do relly have a lot of fun it sounds like
ReplyDeleteHi Cayleigh, Fenix VT323 Here.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way that you put a photo in your poem or writing.
Did you think about more of the things you may more do than find easter eggs.
Next time, you could add more photos of easter times.
Bye Cayleigh!
Hi Nirvana here good job I love how you can wake up and eggs are in your backyard.
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ReplyDeleteCool! this story is really interesting.
Maybe next time you could check if it makes sense.
Hi Milla here this is really cool and interesing...
ReplyDeleteHi it is Kareem, I really like this blog post it is very interesting and how big is the easter eggs?
ReplyDeleteI think this blog post needs some an's in it for vowels
Ka pai,
Kareem
Hi Cayeilgh its Kay-lee in Rata I love your blog post and did you think of the picks and why did you put 1 image so bye and cool !!!!!
ReplyDeleteWhoa 25 easter eggs that is lots of eggs!I like your easter blog also you have a black highlight it's awesome nice egg image.
ReplyDeletenice job cayleigh its fantastic! so good keep it up.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sonny I like how you celibrate easter.
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Hi Cayleigh it is Ethan there is so many full stops maybe next time tell us more info how to play the game good job bye
ReplyDeleteHow did you pol it off Caleigh and it is cool
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Cayleigh Sita here!
ReplyDeleteI am a year six in Rimu Class you might not of heard of me before!
It looks like you have a lot of fun when it comes to easter time!
I like how you added where you go to find the eggs and that how you feel after you eat all of them. I also like how you said how much eggs you get that is quite a lot! I have a question, when you say "we get 25 each" what do you mean by each do you have siblings?
Keep up the AWESOME work!!!
Bye
Good job Cayleigh! something you could work on is tell us one bit something else you do on easter
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cayleigh, This is really interesting I like how you woke up and there is eggs outside ill bet you to them. Maybe next time use a different font so it's easier to read and clearer to understand. BLog ya later
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