I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In Aussie we taste the salt water in the sea. Kangaroos bouncing around as in the park. Kangaroos and fluffy koalas. The people sing a song and make me feel good. Gemeve and I smell the Koalas fluffy fur. I love Australia.
Hi Cayleigh Ethan in tawa here I like how you put I smell fluffy fur off the Koalas I also like the pictures of the Koalas maybe next time put a bit more information and are some of the koalas from the jungle? blog you later!
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ReplyDeleteHi Cayleigh Ethan in tawa here
ReplyDeleteI like how you put I smell fluffy fur off the Koalas I also like the pictures of the Koalas maybe next time put a bit more information and are some of the koalas from the jungle? blog you later!
Hi cayleigh
ReplyDeleteI love your doc about Australia but I think put some writing. By the way I love the photos that you got.
i like your pictues and the words you used
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