This week we have been doing Writing and we have 3 this we can write about and in writing about horror because I like to make horror story because horror is funny if you make it funny I also think its fun, This is our planning we had done we have not Finnish yet.
Next time I want to make it a lot better then it is now.
Hi Cayleigh
ReplyDeleteThanks for putting so much effort into your planning - you have obviously worked hard on this. I have a few things that might help:
CHARACTERS: In this section you should write a description of three of your main characters (Carter and Mark and one other person).
SETTING: This is where you write a description of the places where the story takes place.
ORIENTATION: this is where you list:
- WHO: who are the characters
- WHEN: when did this take place
- WHERE: where did the story take place
COMPLICATION: Here you just need to say what the problem is that the characters have to solve.
I hope this helps.
- Mr Mitchell
By the way, the second set of synonyms you provided were for "Picnic" instead of "panic" (panic means uncontrollable fear, anxiety)